Elements of Elegance.: Let Down

Thursday, May 26, 2011

Let Down

Accident this, unfortunate coincidence that.
I move on along, you just stay put.
Pulling the strings, pushing me away.
One step forward, and another one back.
Getting nowhere, opposites don't attract.

Plans fall apart,
everything goes wrong.
Petty excuses formulate,
nothing is ever right.

At the end of the day,
I'm not sure what you value,
anymore.

And frankly, I'm tired of it.
Cause when push comes to shove,
you're always just a let down.

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agent hhgzMay 27, 2011 at 9:31 PM
:( Very sad and moving. I think in some places the phrasing/rhyme? is awkward but otherwise I really like it ^-^ Is it based off something that happened in real life? =/
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J♥YCE.May 28, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Oh, I definitely agree!! The first stanza-ish thing especially is super awkward. But I really wanted each line in it. And it just so worked out that some lines sort of sounded like they rhymed, but then not really, which makes the whole thing even more awkward. :P
I kind of cranked this one out in a few minutes, so it's definitely rough-sounding. I may try to go back in fix it later on.

And to your second question: To be honest, almost all of these poems, especially the one's labelled "self inspired" are off of something that has happened recently, but I exaggerate and dramatize them GREATLYYY. But that's almost how every poem out there is. So, in the moment I was writing this I was experiencing a great sense of disappointment in someone, but it really was no biggie of a let down issue. So, there you have it. :)
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agent hhgzMay 29, 2011 at 5:17 PM
:) Writing is definitely a good release for those kinds of frustrations ^-^ I normally write rants/prose ish things but the same thing does occur with me likewise, so I am totally 100% with you!

Actually, I don't mind the half rhymes at all, I think they work very well with the poem-- what I was thinking of was perhaps the length of each line?
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J♥YCE.May 29, 2011 at 6:50 PM
Oh for sure! I have actually read several of your posts and loved them, esp. the one about accepting icky circumstances and just getting over it, and basically not whining and other really good points. And I honestly never mind hearing rants. :]

Ohh, yeah. And well, that too. :P Thanks for the feedback, love.
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agent hhgzMay 29, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Awww thank you m'dear <3 And anytime--- good writing has certainly become an underappreciated art nowadays :)
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I think there is a general misconception that you write poems because you ‘have something to say.’ I think, actually, that you write poems because you have something echoing around in the bone-dome of your skull that you cannot say. Poetry allows us to hold many related tangential notions in very close orbit around each other at the same time. The ‘unsayable’ thing at the center of the poem becomes visible to the poet and reader in the same way that dark matter becomes visible to the astrophysicist. You can’t see it, but by measure of its effect on the visible, it can become so precise a silhouette you can almost know it.

-Rebecca Lindenberg

The Elements

Language - Words are the essence of life. Sure, a picture is worth a thousand words, but a string of words added together can convey so much meaning and emotion. I think poetry is fantastic, because it's so free and improvisational, yet it can give off so much life and reason. The simplicity and brevity of a poem makes it so much more enjoyable. Ever since I read House on Mango Street, vignettes have kind of been my favorite. It's simply beautiful.
Imagery - It always amazes me how much beauty there is in the world, and how our eyes can perceive it so easily. A picture captures this splendor in one second of time. There's so much that can happen in a photo - lighting, angle, color, timing, depth. It's pretty darn cool.
Movement - Film is like photography to the next level. It's not just a moment, but a coupla' moments altogether. And there's even more stuff you can do with video. The sequence of scenes, the timing, the zoom, angle, lighting, whatever. Film can contain so many implications that it's hard to keep track of all the feelings, but that's what's amazing about it.
Sound - Without the infinite different noises that we hear day to day and in music, life would be boring. And movies would lack all excitement and enjoyability. Somehow, sounds are able to convey meaning and feelings, and elevate them. It's kind of necessary to life.

It is these elements together that create the facets of the art that I so value. Even so, this is just a small piece of the lemon cake. There is so much more I can't contain in a small blog and so much more yet to discover.

The Purpose

Do I appreciate art? Absolutely.
Do I make my own? No doubt.
Am I skilled at it? I'm not at justice to say.
But I hope you can get a taste of my art and what I consider good art, righthere.
Art isn't just visual. It is linguistic, vocally and hearingly (?). It is still and moving. It is full of emotion and life.

Poetry and Photography are two of the biggest things I admire.
The way that poetry can capture strong feelings and a few words is so amazing. And photography is just so wide-ranging, I love it.

This is just a blog to show my artsy side and appreciation for the simple beauties in the world.
I would love to get all the feedback I can get. Constructive criticism is completely welcome, the best thing you can do for me is help me improve, by telling me what you like and what you don't.
I truly believe that anyone who takes the time to read these things I write and view the pictures I take has the great talent inside of them, or else you wouldn't be looking into what I make. It's an interest in these things that makes them look better in you. Sometimes, you are what you love.

I also have a more diary-like blog. Just ask if you want to read it (:

The Inspiration

The inspiration for the website name: modpodge hedgehog came from a book I read for English Class.
It's called Elegance of the Hedgehog and it's by Muriel Barbury. It's definitely an interesting read. It's fiction, but it involves travel, culture, philosophy, big words, and a cool title. Definitely recommend it, even though there are parts in it that I don't completely agree with. Though the ending may not feel satisfying for some, the parts that lead up to it are wonderfully written and elaborated on.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this as it easily invokes deeper thought and may help you realize how precious life is - and how you make it a life worth lived.

Elements of Elegance.

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Thursday, May 26, 2011

Let Down

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